[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday December 26 - Saturday January 1
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

Dear Readers,
The Weekly Reader will be back on January 31st.  Happy New Years!

Dec   26   Gen -  Second Sight by  Mo Boldock
                 Slash -  The Club Bath Affair by  Liz Knudsen

Dec   27   Gen -  The Gone To The Dogs Affair by  [livejournal.com profile] jazline
                 Slash -  The Merry Christmas to All Affair by  L. White

Dec   28   Gen -  Confused by  [livejournal.com profile] akane42me
                 Slash -  Fit to be Tied by  [livejournal.com profile] graculus

Dec    29    Gen -  The Touch of Death Affair by  JeanGraham
                Slash -  The Senior Project by  [livejournal.com profile] utopiantrunks

Dec    30    Gen -  More Precious Than a Carriage by  Linda Cornett
                Slash -  bewitched by  Cord Smithee
               
Dec   31     Gen -  On Target by  Vicky Loebel
                Slash -  Auld Lang Syne by  [livejournal.com profile] shayheyred
                  Gen -  Someone else is holding me -  by  [livejournal.com profile] hypatia_66
                  Gen -  Choices by  lilidelafield
                Mature M/M -  Fallen by  jessebee

Jan    1      Gen -  Peppermint Twist by  [livejournal.com profile] nangi_akki
                Slash -  Ice and Fire, and other stories by  [livejournal.com profile] aconitumn
                  Gen -  The North of Everywhere Affair by  [livejournal.com profile] girlintheglen2
                  (If additional stories for January 1 are posted I will add them here in a few weeks.)             
                 
                  
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
This article is from The Writer's Toolbox - Faculty Articles - Gotham Writers Workshop.


Opening Lines As First Impressions

by Josh Sippie



It’s hard to argue that the whole “you only get one chance to make a first impression” logic doesn’t also apply to writing. The first line of a narrative is the first foray into the voice of the author, the creativeness, the style, the everything. If that isn’t on par with what you, the reader, are looking for, then what’s leading you to believe that the rest of the narrative will change?

For that matter, why should you give it the chance to change when there are so many other options out there to consume?

So what makes an interesting first line? Let’s take a look.

Take, for instance, the first line of the memoir The Glass Castle by Jeanette Walls:

I was sitting in a taxi, wondering if I had overdressed for the evening, when I looked out the window and saw Mom rooting through a dumpster.

Simple, but enticing, no? There is no throat clearing, no preamble, no walk-up, nothing hokey about it. The story begins in the very first sentence. If you plant their feet in the story in the first line then the only reason they will leave before the next sentence is if they just don’t like your voice, your style, your story.

And you know what they say—don’t write for everyone. Because you’ll never please them all.

Give your reader the story immediately. If that means starting in the middle of action, like watching your mom root through a dumpster, great. Start there. The story is already in motion and the reader is now part of it. They’re asking themselves all kinds of questions: What was Jeanette doing that evening? Why was her mother in the dumpster? What was she looking for?

Or, if you don’t want to start in the middle of the action, try introducing conflict. Take Flannery O’Connor’s short story “A Good Man Is Hard To Find” for example:

The grandmother didn’t want to go to Florida.

Why not? What grandmother? Why doesn’t she have a name?

Or try intrigue, like in the memoir I’m The One Who Got Away by Andrea Jarrell:

Susannah was murdered just before Christmas but I didn’t find out until after New Year’s.

Who is Susannah? How was she murdered? Why didn’t Andrea know?

What do all of these beginnings have in common? The reader is asking questions. If they are asking questions after the first line, they will be curious enough to try the second. If you force them to ask questions—good questions, mind you—they will seek out the answers.

That’s not the only method, though it’s a great place to start. You might also try poking their emotions. You only have one sentence, so don’t try to drop the weight of the world on their shoulders all in one fell swoop, but giving them a prod to make them smile or worry or feel empathy towards the protagonist is another way to ensure that the first line does its job.

One of the best examples comes from Lena Dunham’s memoir Not That Kind Of Girl:

When I was nine, I wrote a vow of celibacy on a piece of paper and ate it.

Are you smiling? Because I am, and this isn’t the first time I’ve read that line. If you can get a genuine smile from the reader with one line, they are going to trust you for more smiles in the lines and pages to come.

Maybe you’re not writing a smiley piece, though. Cory Taylor wasn’t in his memoir (and the title should give the tone away) Dying: A Memoir. But his first line does the trick:

About two years ago I bought a euthanasia drug online from China.

Worried yet? (It also makes them ask questions, but we’re past that part.)

Both Dunham and Taylor accomplished the same thing in their first line with very different tactics. They poke the reader’s emotions. And since both stories are marketed to the right audience, that effective poke is what made their entire story so effective.

The tried and true method, no matter the approach, is to think like the reader. When you go to read an essay, or pick up a memoir, or a poem, or an article or short story—what do you look for? You look for intrigue, emotion, adventure. You want to ask questions and have them answered. You want your emotions to be poked and prodded and taken for a ride.

Do the same for your readers. Get them to ask questions that they then seek the answer to, or get them to feel something that they want more of. That’s how to ensure they get to sentence No. 2.

This article originally appeared on the Brevity blog

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday December 19 - Saturday December 25
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

Dec   19   Gen -  The Twelve Days of UNCLE - Chapter 2 by  [livejournal.com profile] ssclassof56
                 Slash -  Shower by  [livejournal.com profile] aconitumn

Dec   20   Gen -  Art Imitating Life by  Charlie Kirby  [livejournal.com profile] spikesgirl58
                 Slash -  Entering at a Bad Time by  TheRimmerConnection

Dec   21   Gen -  The Pas De Deux Affair by  Glenna Merideth  [livejournal.com profile] girlintheglen2
                 Slash -  Only Optimists by  viviana

Dec    22    Gen -  Spice of Life by  [livejournal.com profile] rose_of_pollux
                Slash -  The Spangled Schoolteacher Affair by  bitochondria

Dec    23    Gen -  Matchmaking by  captain_starcat
                Slash -  After the Ball by  Adriane
                       
Dec   24     Gen -  Christmasfic: This Night of Nights by  [livejournal.com profile] azdak
                Slash -  The Angel of Mercy Affair by  [livejournal.com profile] lee_the_t
                  Gen -  The Wolf Interval by  Paper_Crane_Song
                  Gen -  Anything's Possible by  [livejournal.com profile] hypatia_66

Dec   25    Gen -  The Choose Your Own Christmas Affair by  [livejournal.com profile] cyo_xmas
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday December 12 - Saturday December 18
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

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[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday December 5 - Saturday December 11
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday November 28 - Saturday December 4
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday November 21 - Saturday November 27
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday November 14 - Saturday November 20
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday November 7 - Saturday November 13
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday October 31 - Saturday November 6
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday October 24 - Saturday October 30
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

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[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday October 17 - Saturday October 23
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday October 10 - Saturday October 16
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, section7mfu Writers and Readers Choice
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[identity profile] spikesgirl58.livejournal.com
We are having a drop by Halloween party over in [livejournal.com profile] mfu_canteen. We'd love to have you join us!

[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday October 3 - Saturday October 9
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, sectionn7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

Dear Readers,
The Weekly Reader will be on hiatus for the next two weeks. I'll get things caught up by the end of the month. Thanks. - AK

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[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday September 26 - Saturday October 2
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, sectionn7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

The listing is under the cut )
[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com



The MFUWSS Writing Challenge is going on hiatus until January.

The fandom has Halloween challenges in progress, and the Christmas challenges will arrive right after that, so we're taking a break until after the holidays. 

The January Challenge will be announced January 1st.

If you have questions, comments, or suggestions, please let me know!

Ideas for prompts are welcome!  Post your ideas here in the comments! Thanks!
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Happy Birthday Mrua !!

May this year fulfill all your dreams and wishes


[identity profile] akane42me.livejournal.com
A roundup of MFU story recs for Sunday September 19 - Saturday  September 25
Sources: mfu_shortstorie Daily Links, uncle_du_jour Fanfic Friday, sectionn7mfu Writers and Readers Choice

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